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One Response to “Episode 7 | Reviewing LiveInnovative.com”

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   Justin Stolle
   

   19. Apr, 2010

   Great suggestions as usual, Rob. It looks like they’ve already implemented some of the recommendations. If I could add my own constructive criticism, they need a copy editor. Probably the first text you see is “Why Chose Us?” followed by “Deciding whether or not a website is vital for your organization is an important decision.” It’s wordy, redundant, and nonsensical. The copy throughout the site suffers from similar problems. It would be valuable to have someone with writing skills translate it all into marketing language.